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    dots Submission Name: Good Intentionsdots
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    Author: isis_lenore
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    dotsGood Intentionsdots
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    Good Intentions-
    You think they will save you
    much like mortar holds bricks in place.

    Good intentions-
    Too much like the stale vase water
    found below once vibrant, wilting flowers.

    Good intentions-
    I'm not ready to explain mine.
    So I won't yet ask you, about yours.




    Submitted on 2010-05-19 05:25:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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