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    dots Submission Name: Feel the Wind's Loving Caress...dots
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    Author: Mythica
    ASL Info:    17/female/KY USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 11/31/16
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Something that just came to me.....I get alot of these...


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    dotsFeel the Wind's Loving Caress...dots
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    Cool in the summer
    Warm in te winter
    Always there to listen

    It relieves your mind of hunger
    It lets your spirit soar
    It calms your soul when stressed

    Always there, never gone
    A friend when you need it.
    The shadow at your back to push you on.

    The wind can be a very generous ally.




    Submitted on 2010-05-19 12:07:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know this has little to do with the poem but it comforted me , so thank you . I've been so depressed lately . It has been so long since you posted anything new . Good to see you writing .
    | Posted on 2010-07-12 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      This IS excellent! I have read a million poems about the wind, yet never one like this! Superb, super, wonderful... a unique and most positive look at an old, old subject of poetry... I loved this poem. Bravo!!!
    | Posted on 2010-06-16 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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