Feel the Wind's Loving Caress... by Mythica

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Author:	Mythica
ASL Info:	17/female/KY USA
Elite Ratio:	1.79 - 11/31/16
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1100
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	366

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Something that just came to me.....I get alot of these...

Feel the Wind's Loving Caress... dots

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Cool in the summer
Warm in te winter
Always there to listen

It relieves your mind of hunger
It lets your spirit soar
It calms your soul when stressed

Always there, never gone
A friend when you need it.
The shadow at your back to push you on.

The wind can be a very generous ally.

Submitted on 2010-05-19 12:07:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I know this has little to do with the poem but it comforted me , so thank you . I've been so depressed lately . It has been so long since you posted anything new . Good to see you writing .
| Posted on 2010-07-12 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
This IS excellent! I have read a million poems about the wind, yet never one like this! Superb, super, wonderful... a unique and most positive look at an old, old subject of poetry... I loved this poem. Bravo!!!
| Posted on 2010-06-16 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.