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    dots Submission Name: Love Poemsdots
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    Author: Dutchess_aira
    ASL Info:    23/f/HI
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 41/42/22
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 932
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       When some is deployed its never easy and I often wished it were but this world has no time for wishes..I miss him


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    dotsLove Poemsdots
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    All I can think to write are love poems
    And I don't want to write another poem
    Of you, the cliché you; Love...You...its obvious
    You know your name
    How I tend to play with the first and the
    Last Letter of your last name
    Millions Speak it everyday
    I smile two times that of pi squared
    smirking just from your first name
    Mumbling it as I sleep
    Whispering LOVE before LIKE
    Wedged between LUST and ACHE
    Not a painful ache but a longing
    To write something meaningful
    That would outshine any love infested poem
    I could ever transpose
    But all I can think of are love poems




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