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Rain


Author: mistiekidd
ASL Info:    31 like it f Al
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Words: 98
Class/Type: Prose /Misc
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I just wanted to try something new to me, different.


Rain



Your so cold, your always blue.
You beat on me, what am I to do?
I hate you! You make me sick!
If it was up to you I would never
even see the sun.
You become violent and scare me
to death!
When I'm sad you depress me more!
Your always over-dosed with acid,
I have no control of anything you do.
In the end after you come down from
your high and all is calm, I know your
my friend. I'm glad I stayed.
I couldn't live with out you now could I,
rain?




Submitted on 2010-05-20 04:23:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2010-05-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
  I was going into quick-breath mode for a minute, ahhhhh RAIN! LOL, you had me, despite the title (I can never remember them, so I promptly forgot yours in the 2nd line and was like, Oh Hell No!) :)

Jam an auto-Totes up his bungie, I was about to say, and snap that button on him... I do it to Rain all the time.

You're cracking my head today, girl, keep it up!
| Posted on 2010-05-20 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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