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    dots Submission Name: Faithdots
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    Author: Spin
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 72/101/84
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFaithdots
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    Just ask
    said a man holding a bleeding heart
    fast will it beat
    stone cold will it rest
    if the answer is yes
    bless me with you patience
    and I will fill your life with faith
    scorn me with your arrogance
    and forgotten will be your soul.
    Lost circling the depths of perception
    like a sharks fate
    opposite the bait.




    Submitted on 2010-05-21 17:34:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would take the life full faith, rather than a life away from God. Very nice work.
    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2010-05-22 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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