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    Author: wovenwords
    ASL Info:    19/F/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 108/303/189
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDying, asteroids, etc.dots
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    “If you could choose, or like, if you had to choose, how would you die?” they all ask. Most people make up something really daring or something real easy, like in your sleep, or in surgery in your fake anesthetized sleep. I like to shock them—start by acting like I haven’t been sure for years, haven’t perfected each moment in the least morbid, suicidal way possible. Then I say “asteroid” and they say “what” and I say, “Well okay, I’ll be in a field or a park lying in the grass, totally oblivious, right? And everyone is walking their dog or having a lovely little picnic and then BAM that huge metally rock zooms down straight from outer space and out of all the places to fall in the world

    it chooses my head.”

    The person will look at me and say “but wouldn’t that hurt” and I’d be all, “But it chooses my head.” And they’d go, “But it’s your head.” And I’d go “But maybe they’d name it after me, save the picture of my body poking out with a giant hunk of rock where my face should be. The kids would call me asteroidhead. I’d like that, I think.”




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