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    dots Submission Name: Wishing Upon A Dreamdots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1010
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    Description:
       Let's just say I didn't want to wake up from my dream, but I woke up with him next to me and I wished that it would come true. I guess only time will tell!


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    dotsWishing Upon A Dreamdots
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    I had this dream of you and me,
    You and I were meant to be,
    And in this dream we frolicked far,
    Wishing once upon shooting stars.

    You kissed your lips on mine and sighed,
    Placed a ring upon my hand,
    Whispered slowly into my ear,
    This is a promise, forever more.

    One day you and I,
    Shall be united til the end of time,
    And we shall never part in ways,
    Because I love you more than words can say.

    Blushing deeply and grinning broad,
    I couldn’t wait for the day to come,
    In every day I told someone,
    Was one day closer to being one.




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