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Author: night_angel
ASL Info:    22/F/MI
Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 188 /242 /100
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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You know who you are, you know what you mean to me. You are my everything; my world... and I love you dearly.


You try to convince all,
That you are a monster.
Though I have never been;
Nor will I ever be fooled by this.

I live with you and I know,
I love you and I've seen,
The great man you hope to be,
Is the man you already are to me.

You need to believe more in you,
You need to trust more in me.
Even the most ignorant person knows,
Everything you are, is what you choose to be.

Submitted on 2010-05-24 23:32:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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