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    dots Submission Name: Why this Lifedots
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    Author: paulsanctuary
    ASL Info:    22/M/OK
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/6
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 674
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    Description:
       I was thinking on how the world was acting now a days. Why are we getting so low and not respectful to anyone? What happened to this world honestly, I MISS THE GOOD DAYS? Memories!!!!


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    dotsWhy this Lifedots
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    Why is this life so hard to live when every day the thing a
    person can ask for is more happiness and joy. Humans run a
    muck not trying to put together what life really means and
    how to live it piece by piece as dreams are shattered and
    broken down! Can joy be any further away were we can't
    reach it at all...or can it be so close that we realize
    that life is much more. No person in the 21st century ever
    realize what pain and sadness is until something happens
    to them that they unbind in tears and sorrow. Why can't
    anyone ever see the pain that a real American person is in
    with the war and the discrimination on their own kind. Why
    can't they see us when we're hurt and sadden by the
    beatings and the killings we go through for being ourselves
    and not anyone else. When will it stop when will this world
    that we call free be more like heaven with us walking on
    clouds of glory. When will we be able to walk without crime
    on our streets and not being afraid to walk around a
    corner...when will it stop when we take our last breathe
    of fresh air...or worse dead...






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