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trophy u think u r


Author: ladiesplanet1
ASL Info:    23.cali baby
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Words: 334
Class/Type: Lyrics /Venting
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drunkin spits


trophy u think u r



who da fuk r u bitch
all up on my shit
how bout i wana fukn kill myself
how bout i dont wanna think these thots no more
how bout instead of everyone worryin bout me
all da time it could jus b over wit already
i feel ugly
no one would dare to fuck wit me
a hideous beast beyond ur dreams
behind these eyes
there is a mind full of lies
cries
n too many failed tries
it feels like a failed life
the knife i struggle wit
barey touches da skin
as i hesitate where i begin
u bring out a passion in me
i didnt know was there any more
n yet u barely know i exist
n i think i love you more than da world
ur my one da one i dream of at at night
im alone
whether or not ur wit me
u play so hard dat i dont even want u
ur ugly ur rude
n i cant stand to want u
i dont wana flaunt u
like da trophy dat u think u r
ur nothin but a whore
i hate u
n im not ready to walk thru dat door
into another demension
dat neither one of us knows
i might go crazy
i might jus kill u for no reason known to anyone but us
n who r u to tell me dat im wrong
or anyone
i wouldnt have done it if i didnt believe it was right
it was war
u made me do dis
u made me believe it was wat it was
n i almost understood ur reasonin behind it
but then again
in da end
whos gon really b da one
who won




Submitted on 2010-05-25 00:01:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hey and hi this has some ... d up meaning i no its venting and all but the suicide thing is a bit over the edge but all in all a good vent

sandman
| Posted on 2010-05-25 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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