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    dots Submission Name: A Love Letter to theedots
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    Author: paulsanctuary
    ASL Info:    22/M/OK
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/6
    Words: 278
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 426
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    Description:
       A Love Letter I wrote a dearest love of mine that is now but ex but never forgotten, I made a promise!


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    dotsA Love Letter to theedots
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    I promise to bring you stars you dreamt of and would strive to bring you all happiness of life. Your sweet talks and your lovely smile has added the spice in my life which has been tasteless all the while.I feel so warm and affectionate in your arms and feel as if my life begins and ends with you. When you are not around, I just feel I should keep reading your lovely emails again and again...... I feel more happy the closer I am to you. For me love is life and love is you. I love to talk to you on phone and my talks never end. There is always a new topic to share with you. I can indeed share every minute and every silly incidence of my life with you. I have wowed you from the very day I met you. Your entry in my life was out of the blue, but yes, it has brought several new things. Now I can see the rainbow in my life and feel the beauty of everything around me. Life had indeed become barren prior to meeting you and as if you brought oasis to my life.I
    used to feel strange how people can sing love songs, and write love stories, but after meeting you I feel even I can do that. You have favored me with that lovely environment that I hear music in the background. Today I can understand the deep meanings of the love notes printed and published in the magazines and on the net. The deeper you dive in the better you understand the beauty of love.Thanks for love and life....




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