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    dots Submission Name: Ghostdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       All around the world people stop and they see.

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    sound escapes between his lips
    in a battle for breath and air

    his eyes flutter
    as he hesitates in his sleep

    never dreams
    unless the night was full

    and they are half collected and imagined forms of everything

    in his heart he knows no limits
    but walks with a shield

    he tells me,

    I live on the highest building of hope
    and the altitude
    up here
    this early in the morning
    is comfortable

    is hope

    wide as far as the eye can see and the mind can think
    I am not limited to this building
    I am not bound to the walls in between

    I am living in a world that goes one way
    that can't be erased

    and one day when I die
    I will be gone forever

    I would rather sit up here
    right now
    how fragile life is
    how beautiful
    how doomed

    how like the sea
    the air
    and the wind and the rain

    the perspiration on his brow
    cannot be compared to being loved

    I am an entity
    that appreciates

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      stanzas nine and twelve make me think of "City of Angels" and Dennis Franz' character...who was an angel but became human so he could experience love, growing old...just the normal things...but he still also had the angel's perspective, way of looking at things too...

    this gives me that feeling...that other dimension..the really curious one where spirits roam on the other side for whatever reason..

    when i die..i would like to be one of them...

    i really like the seventh stanza so much...lots about this i like.

    | Posted on 2011-05-18 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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