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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 191/191/129
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    "in the old days
    if a poet cursed you,
    you'd lie you down beneath the hazel
    soon as you were able
    for there was no help for you anymore"

    "before the cross came
    if the words turned against you,
    you'd take your own pen
    and a willow wand
    and die with it
    with an empty tongue
    for in your mind, you'd already died"

    if

    words

    can

    kill

    I hold destruction in my hand


    if

    words

    can

    kill

    my tongue is a weapon of mass destruction
    the mind is the only tool of true construction
    what I build there can never die
    and not even the light can tell me to lie

    lamias and lords, martyrs, men and saints
    jezebels and queans, viragos and somnificates,
    your power comes from
    the breath of your life
    your sophisms take
    your ouevre to your might

    liliths and lepers, highwaymen and tykes,
    nocuers and night-goers of all manner of stripe,
    oneiric osculable youths and maids,
    sanguisugents and solivigants alike,
    by the heartbeat of the head, you are staid.

    unlaced.

    ---

    if

    words

    can

    birth

    there are no orphans

    ---
    in the old days...
    but nothing's changed


    I hold chaos in my hand every time I pick up a pen


    you hold the power of heaven
    of hell
    in your hands.

    use it




    Submitted on 2010-05-25 20:44:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Good work. I experience the insight as a reality of unequal significance regarding the power of mind over matter.
    It is a proven fact that mind create matter as experienced in my reality and frequencies of existence. Really deep insight me thinks. Luv joachim
    | Posted on 2010-05-27 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]
      You sounds like quite an expressive person. I liked this piece. It is very inspiring and creative. I have not seen the likes of it on this site; though of-course I have not been to this site in some time. Either way... Keep up the good work. Fantastic job.
    | Posted on 2010-05-25 00:00:00 | by night_angel | [ Reply to This ]


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