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    dots Submission Name: Panicdots
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    Author: deadpoet
    ASL Info:    18/f/ Miami, Fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 44/66/27
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Venting
    Total Views: 299
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    Description:
       This was how I felt 2 months ago when my ex boyfreind was in a coma. i was panicking and hopping he wouldn't die. Luckily he didn't. He woke up not remembering anything that had happened the last six months of his life. But now he remembers, after a week or so trying to remember.


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    dotsPanicdots
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    The twinge of fear that creeps up suddenly.
    The thoughts that won't go away,
    And urges to be replaced by release.

    A feeling that can only be a few seconds.
    Or the thought that sink in behind you and won't go,
    Away.
    The speculations of forgetfullness,
    And the terror of telling someone what they don't want to hear.

    The sudden assumptions,
    Or the just realizing the awful truths,
    The thoughts of the worst happening,
    And trying to hide what you did.

    The horror that fills you mind,
    And imprisons your previous contemplation,
    Filled with hate, fear, and worries,
    A feeling that can't be comforted,
    Or driven by a few laughs.




    Submitted on 2004-07-25 13:33:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the poem was good, but maby you could add a little more detail??.. maby saying what happent or somthing like that it just seems like somthing different but in a way the same
    | Posted on 2004-07-25 00:00:00 | by kLaDeeDa | [ Reply to This ]
      that really sucks.. my uncle had a heart attack and lost his memory a couple weeks ago and he thought he was in the navy again.. he is 50 some odd yearsb old and he was in the navy when he was in his early 20's. he didnt even know his parents were dead or his father-in-law was dead... that really sux.. he is starting to remember some things though.. so the second stanza is what i liked the best(i dont know if i should say "liked") but that is what i had the most in common with in this poem. i really like this poem besides the whole thing with my uncle.. i think its cool that you can care so much about your ex-boyfriend still... all the people i know say they love them one minute when their dating and when they break up its all like who cares?... this is a good poem also! lol


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    | Posted on 2004-07-25 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]



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