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My Other Me


Author: PhantomRose
ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43 /58 /35
Words: 1862
Class/Type: Poetry /Mirror or Mask
Total Views: 827
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Description:


Something I had to do for class. Not really my style, and I don't really like it, but I figured I'd put it on here anyways.


My Other Me



do You
see me?
i know You
so well,
We
grew up
Together
in
a
place
so like
Hell.
i
do not
know
Your name,
i've
never
heard it
Said,
i've
only
heard You
Whisper
secrets
in
my
head.
the things
You say
are
Cruel
and
drown out
my
rational thinging,
You
take over
my
Mind
and
leave me
feeling
like
i'm
Sinking.
there's
nowhere
i can
Run
no place
for me
to
Hide,
all i can
do
is
sit back
and
Suffer
this
horrid
ride.
i don't
want You
Here
and yet
i can't
let
You
Go
You
say things
in
such a way
that
i
can never
say
No.
i know
in
my
heart
that
i
am
Good,
that
i
would
never
Hurt
a fly.
but
when
You're
the One
in
control
You think
it's
Ok
to
make
people
Die.
i don't
always
try
to stop
You,
Sometimes
i
welcome
You in.
sometimes
the
only way
to
get by
is
to
commit
that
little
Sin
even as i
write this
i
feel You
Floating
to the
surface,
but
i
don't think
i'll
stop You
today,
no matter
what
Your
Purpose.
i
think
i'll let You
roam
Free
and you
can make
Them
pay
i'll just
sit back
and
Smile,
for
it's not
so
Horrid
today.




Submitted on 2010-05-26 23:45:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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