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    dots Submission Name: My Other Medots
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    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 1862
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 463
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       Something I had to do for class. Not really my style, and I don't really like it, but I figured I'd put it on here anyways.


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    dotsMy Other Medots
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    do You
    see me?
    i know You
    so well,
    We
    grew up
    Together
    in
    a
    place
    so like
    Hell.
    i
    do not
    know
    Your name,
    i've
    never
    heard it
    Said,
    i've
    only
    heard You
    Whisper
    secrets
    in
    my
    head.
    the things
    You say
    are
    Cruel
    and
    drown out
    my
    rational thinging,
    You
    take over
    my
    Mind
    and
    leave me
    feeling
    like
    i'm
    Sinking.
    there's
    nowhere
    i can
    Run
    no place
    for me
    to
    Hide,
    all i can
    do
    is
    sit back
    and
    Suffer
    this
    horrid
    ride.
    i don't
    want You
    Here
    and yet
    i can't
    let
    You
    Go
    You
    say things
    in
    such a way
    that
    i
    can never
    say
    No.
    i know
    in
    my
    heart
    that
    i
    am
    Good,
    that
    i
    would
    never
    Hurt
    a fly.
    but
    when
    You're
    the One
    in
    control
    You think
    it's
    Ok
    to
    make
    people
    Die.
    i don't
    always
    try
    to stop
    You,
    Sometimes
    i
    welcome
    You in.
    sometimes
    the
    only way
    to
    get by
    is
    to
    commit
    that
    little
    Sin
    even as i
    write this
    i
    feel You
    Floating
    to the
    surface,
    but
    i
    don't think
    i'll
    stop You
    today,
    no matter
    what
    Your
    Purpose.
    i
    think
    i'll let You
    roam
    Free
    and you
    can make
    Them
    pay
    i'll just
    sit back
    and
    Smile,
    for
    it's not
    so
    Horrid
    today.




    Submitted on 2010-05-26 23:45:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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