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    dots Submission Name: Puppet Lifedots

    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 533
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1082

       No clue. Just wrote it one day.

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    dotsPuppet Lifedots

    Puppeteer of men
    Holder of our strings
    You force all of our movement
    And make us dance your wicked dance
    You twist us and contort us
    Into a shape that suits you best
    We hang here on our strings
    Not much more than lifeless
    Saying what you whisper
    Moving as you will it -
    Until one day you leave us
    And the lifeless move no more
    We only hang and wonder
    Why after all this time you left us
    To dangle here alone.
    Then in the darkness you whisper
    And in the darkness we say:
    "You humans are unworthy"
    "(We humans are unworthy)"
    "To live the lives I give"
    "(To live the lives you give)"
    "So now I take them back"
    "(So now you take them back)"
    And with those words
    He cuts our strings
    And all at once we hit the ground
    Then as the darkness is closing in
    The last thing we all hear
    Is the vicious cackle
    Of our evil puppeteer.

    Submitted on 2010-05-26 23:59:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    I've written many similar, but I feel this takes the cake.

    well done jaymee, little upset i had to read it on here though.

    poo eater.

    | Posted on 2010-06-05 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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