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    dots Submission Name: Scream Silencedots
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    Author: RisingSon
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 7/79/52
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Lot's of repetition here. I know. I know.


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    dotsScream Silencedots
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    scream silence
    like canyon
    like sole solemn pilgrim
    if ever
    was waiting
    on ships without sails

    sing sorrow
    like train tracks
    all running to sunsets
    like blue birds
    seek silence
    seem speckles of sky

    seek solace
    like siphon
    like strange empty hollow
    for family
    such stifle
    some singular voice

    see sound-makes
    like treasure
    fake paper on airwaves
    slow symbols
    come crawling
    cross fingers and eyes

    feel failure
    like snowdreams
    like shipmates
    like hours

    like tiny
    like maybe
    like maybe
    today




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