[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Scream Silencedots

    Author: RisingSon
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 7/79/52
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 532
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 753

       Lot's of repetition here. I know. I know.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsScream Silencedots

    scream silence
    like canyon
    like sole solemn pilgrim
    if ever
    was waiting
    on ships without sails

    sing sorrow
    like train tracks
    all running to sunsets
    like blue birds
    seek silence
    seem speckles of sky

    seek solace
    like siphon
    like strange empty hollow
    for family
    such stifle
    some singular voice

    see sound-makes
    like treasure
    fake paper on airwaves
    slow symbols
    come crawling
    cross fingers and eyes

    feel failure
    like snowdreams
    like shipmates
    like hours

    like tiny
    like maybe
    like maybe

    Submitted on 2010-05-27 15:46:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    written by Daniel Barlow
    True Death written by layDsayD
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Linger written by saartha
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    AI written by poetotoe
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Every..... written by jackz
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]