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    dots Submission Name: Carrots Are Specialdots
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    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       I just had carrots for dinner, and they were really good... I got sick of trolling on hear looking for someone to comment on, so I made a poem, and it actually turned out good.... tell me what you think. :P

    BTW! Carrots are good for your eyes... lol


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    dotsCarrots Are Specialdots
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    Carrots are simple
    Carrots take time
    Carrots don't care
    if my poems don't Rhyme

    Carrots can't love
    Carrots can't care
    Carrots can't enjoy
    the love that we share

    Carrots taste good
    Carrots taste sweet
    Carrots are best
    but the mess is never neat

    Carrots can't run
    Carrots can hide
    Carrots are good
    with a little butter on the side...




    Submitted on 2010-05-27 22:55:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      &#47568;&#51012; &#47672;&#46021;&#51077;&#45768;&#45796; (istalkmurdoch in Korean)

    That is a very cute poem on carrots. I never would have dreamed that one could do a poem on carrots. I would love to go devour a carrot right now (damn allergen). I'll dream of eating a carrot instead <3
    | Posted on 2010-06-03 00:00:00 | by Ariven | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was very cute lol I love carrots myself ;) Thank you for your feedback on my poem. Sometimes it is hard to put your true feelings out there but there are times, at least for me, where it seems almost necessary. I have to get it off my chest somehow!

    Anyway, I liked this. Short but would be great for a child to read ^_^
    | Posted on 2010-05-30 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool
    Gotta get me a carrot. Cool beta carotene rich fun. But I like my carrot crunchy and hate it soft. Cool fun write. Please do one for raw garlic or onions I can't seem to eat them raw
    | Posted on 2010-05-30 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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