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    dots Submission Name: Two Many Things To Saydots
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    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 595
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1079



    Description:
       This poem kind of morphed from one thing to another, and I really like how it turned out.


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    dotsTwo Many Things To Saydots
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    Thank you for the struggles
    without them I would have never grown
    thank you for all the tears
    without them I would have never known

    thank you for all the answers
    without them I would have been confused
    thank you for all the good people
    without them I would have been used

    than you for the truth you give me
    without it I wouldn't see the lies
    thank you for your never ending love
    my heart and yours are tied

    thank you for every day
    that I count as a gift
    for all the troubles
    to you I lift

    I never will understand
    why I feel so much pain
    because you already did
    so mine is in vain

    you took the pain
    every lash to your back
    you have more strength
    strength is what I lack

    lift me up
    break me down
    mold me today
    I see your wondrous crown

    I am unworthy
    I know this is true
    so all I can say
    is thank you




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