Bad Nights

Author: istalkmurdoch Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129 /48 /25 Words: 108

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Bad Nights

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Right when you're about to fall asleep those thoughts come to just wake you up today you failed today you won tomorrow you'll stay tomorrow you'll run you fall asleep those dreams come just to make you sad what happened before can never go away don't worry tomorrows a new day dreams aren't usually happy they are predictably sappy you wake up that sun is up just to cheer you up today truly a new day but I'm afraid it will not stay day will turn dark dark will turn to fright and I will continue to sleep through the eternally sad night

Submitted on 2010-05-30 23:49:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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not all nights are sad, and the good thing about the night is that theirs always a dawn that follows it. good write

| Posted on 2010-12-23 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]

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