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    dots Submission Name: Bad Nightsdots
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    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 781
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 734



    Description:
       last stanza is like lacking something
    I wrote this on a whim
    although I did something naughty
    this piece of work is what I would like to call
    "Vomit Poetry"
    I kind of vomited it out...
    tell me what you think lol


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    dotsBad Nightsdots
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    Right when you're about to fall asleep
    those thoughts come to just wake you up
    today you failed
    today you won
    tomorrow you'll stay
    tomorrow you'll run

    you fall asleep
    those dreams come just to make you sad
    what happened before can never go away
    don't worry tomorrows a new day
    dreams aren't usually happy
    they are predictably sappy

    you wake up
    that sun is up just to cheer you up
    today truly a new day
    but I'm afraid it will not stay

    day will turn dark
    dark will turn to fright
    and I will continue to sleep
    through the eternally sad night




    Submitted on 2010-05-30 23:49:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      not all nights are sad, and the good thing about the night is that theirs always a dawn that follows it. good write
    | Posted on 2010-12-23 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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