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    dots Submission Name: Le Bruit (The Noise)dots

    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 507
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    dotsLe Bruit (The Noise)dots

    Votre voix, c'est une cacophonie violente
    Sirènes de raid aérien dans mes oreilles
    Je pousse votre tête sous l'eau
    Toujours, votre voix remplit mes oreilles vides

    Est-il beaucoup desirer pour silence?
    Est y un moment de paix?
    Je pousse votre tête sous l'eau
    Jusqu'à je sente le dégagement de pression

    Je sente cette fureur inspirée déroule
    Et elle me caresse avec ses bras d'arbre de mesquite
    Je pousse votre tête sous l'eau
    Mais je ne veux pas vous blesser

    (Your voice is a violent cacophony
    Air raid sirens in my ears
    I push your head below water
    Still, your noise fills my empty ears

    Is silence too much to desire?
    Is there never a moment's peace?
    I push your head below water
    Until I feel the pressure release

    I feel that inspired rage unfold
    And caress me with its mesquite tree arms
    I push your head below water
    But I don't mean you any harm)

    Submitted on 2010-06-01 22:49:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      J'ai pensé que c'était très bien écrit, bien que je voudrais savoir pourquoi vous l'avez écrit en français et en anglais?

    lol I too know Français.

    But as I said before I do think that this was very well written. I could see the who scene in my head, and the emotions that you were trying to convey. I don't think that I have anything bad to say about this.

    Continuez d'écrire jusqu'à ce que vous ne pouvez plus! Je voudrais également une évaluation globale sur mon travail, si vous avez le temps;)

    | Posted on 2010-06-01 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]

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