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    dots Submission Name: I Like... You. dots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 490
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 819



    Description:
       This is very out of character for me.


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    dotsI Like... You. dots
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    Your laugh is light personified
    Do you know what you are to me?
    You dont even know how much I care,
    Yet you've got me writing poetry
     
    Around you, I can't help but smile
    In you, such a happiness I find
    How could I not've seen it long ago?
    Perhaps I was just blind...
     
    I like your company very much
    To this I do confess...
    And of all the people in this world,
    It's you I like the best
     
    You never fail to warm my heart
    When I'm feeling down and low
    And I wonder if you feel the same
    Though I may never know
     
    I know it seems so sudden
    But in all truth, it's not-
    It seems I liked you long ago,
    But perhaps, I just forgot




    Submitted on 2010-06-02 00:10:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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