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    dots Submission Name: I Keep Walkingdots

    Author: Diablo Tapitio
    ASL Info:    30
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 85/111/62
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsI Keep Walkingdots

    I keep walking, even though I have lost all will to move,
    I dont feel like living, or breathing, all I feel is solitude.
    I used to have a mission, but now I am so defeated,
    my flags have been lowerd, and my troops have retreated.
    I can still hear your voice calling from down the hall,
    its the ghost of you memory, your death has shocked us all.

    So I lay around in darkness like I dont remember how to get out of bed,
    I clinch my blankets in horror, the images of you hanging will not leave my head.
    I dont know how to do any of the things that I love,
    I face a wall of misery, as I try to rise above.
    I never would have thought my brothers ashes would be in my room,
    I wish I could have helped you, from your world of gloom.
    So I face the flood of emotions, There is no use trying to hide,
    Its way to fucking hard, when your brother commits suicide.

    Submitted on 2010-06-02 11:08:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There's not a whole lot I can say about this piece other than how terribly sorry I am for your loss. Grieving is a painful long process especially when it's family. There's simply no way deal with this pain easily. This poem is raw and as real as I'm sure your feelings are. Unfortunately at least in my experience, some people, some souls are not meant for this planet and cannot hold on. He's in a better place as hard as it is for you to imagine, don't be afraid to talk to him, I firmly believe he can still hear you.... be aware of your dreams

    I wish I could give you a big hug right now :(
    | Posted on 2010-06-03 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]

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