I am a little girl
and i found a rain egg
i kept it under my pillow
and it hatched
and then we fell in love
i don't know if it's a boy or a girl
because only something with estrogen would decide to liquidify itself for a prolonged period -
but then again rain could be god's runny snot
in which case
it is definitely a boy.
the other day i saw my lover rain
on the news
cheating on me with south india
when i asked why he/she was late
for our date
it lied and said something
about hating how predictable everyone thought it was.
are so complicated.
we broke up
coz i grew out of my gumboots
you can't ask someone to come again
when at best all it did was tease you
plus the other day rainegg got all hung up on explaining to me how a drain works
it was gross and i hate it now
i've had enough please
i don't particulary miss rainegg
but i miss some things like
Don't tell it but i wanted to have a rainegg baby at one point
but i was scared of the sky cramps.
so now i have a test tube rain egg
which i will keep under my pillow
for those dry spells
when i'm short of drama in real life
i like that keep-it-simple-lines! the start was very good,
immensely interesting and you got that chemistry thing going pretty well till near the end, where i thought it sagged down jus a tiny little bit. but its a very sweet poem...
n i could sort of connect with that cuz im from hyderabad n i know what you meant about that south india...