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    dots Submission Name: Life Explained in the key of The Walrusdots
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    Author: S.A.M.
    ASL Info:    26/f/xx
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 476/419/137
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Ok so anyone who has ever hear the beatles I am the Walrus yes the entire poem is in simular format and it was the inspiration.


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    dotsLife Explained in the key of The Walrusdots
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    He is she and you are me
    and me is he
    and we are all confused
    see how it turns
    see how it dies
    the worlds gone mad

    Mr. homeless richman
    tell me what do you know
    he's crying
    sunsets rise sunrise falls
    no one seems to notice anymore
    with bloody marry eyepatches on

    See how they run
    like ants from the sun
    singing of redemption
    screaming of thier sins to come
    they're dying
    thinking that the ends upon

    Man we've been a naughty world
    we let the debt grow high
    we are the children they are the problem
    there is no answer
    coo coo ka phht




    Submitted on 2010-06-04 12:29:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Friendly advice-I think you'd have some copyright issues with this.
    | Posted on 2010-06-19 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]


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