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    dots Submission Name: mirrordots
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    Author: nansofast
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 2351/2103/268
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 753
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 416



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    dotsmirrordots
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    sincerely request
    the love of an old soul
    one that inspires and
    stands transcendent
    immanent

    transformable
    according to the moment's need
    solid as it pounds love's emanations
    liquid as it sears and seals with mine
    vapor as we fly across the universe
    to a finer galaxy
    where time and love
    are the same being




    Submitted on 2010-06-06 16:11:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Happy day Nan! This is like I AM feeling in the NOW ~*~

    I've always enjoyed your poetic expressions and musings and am happy to be back posting/reading and to see friends again!

    Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Cosmic. Could it be that we are all "old souls" but for the most part are not allowed to actually know or remember it? I wonder sometimes how far back our genetic memory can function. I wrote a poem called The Wisdom of Men (long ago it seems, perhaps you even remember it) about it being time to start devolving back "to the slime".

    Anyway, this work of yours reminded me of this perhaps because of the reaching into the elemental states and your second stanza speaks to me of going back as much as forward. Thanks for the hug.
    | Posted on 2010-08-10 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the way you went through the states of matter and still didnt give me too much of a 'chemistry class' feel ..
    I would however, like to see it longer really... and i cant relate the title :$..
    Sorry im so bad at the this critique stuff :$ its been a while
    | Posted on 2010-07-22 00:00:00 | by Little Gal | [ Reply to This ]


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