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    dots Submission Name: Psalm of Prayerdots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       Just Seeking help from the Lord


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    dotsPsalm of Prayerdots
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    Judge me OLord;
    Guide me in thy way, That I may Rejoice in thy
    presents OLord.

    Show me OLord; mine own faults OLord, That I may not Judge or Faultlessly accuse others OLord.

    I Pray ye OLord; Help me to Pluck the Thorn from mine own Eye OLord, That I may Rejoice in ye for ever and ever OLord.

    Help me OLord; That I may see through the Faults of All others, That I may not Fall in the way of Evil.

    Search mine Heart oLord; Fill mine Heart with Love and Compassion for mine Enemies OLord, That I may not have Sorrow in mine Heart Twords no man.

    Help me OLord, I Pray; That I can Forgive mine Enemies, That we all may Rejoice in ye OLord.

    Hide me OLord, in the; In mine Times of Trouble from mine Enemies; For I knowOLord, That ye OLord; Am on the Battle Field in mine Place OLord,
    Fighting the Battles Before mine Enemies Get to me OLord.

    For I know OLord; That I can not Fight mine own Battles on mine own with out ye OLord, For I shall fall on mine own Face every time OLord; If it were not for ye OLord, So I Pray that I may stand Fast in ye OLord; I Pray in the Blessed name of our Lord and Saviour: Jesus Christ.

    Written By: William D Thompson Jr




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