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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBrick dots
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    Evacuate this subterfuge carrousel of a world, prioritize the swift incarnation of your old ragged God, all just heinous check marks on an agenda made of lies.
    Spineless shades suffer.
    Tyrannical typecast traitor.
    Typical if you take the time to catch eyes with it's bold face and bright and colorful mask.





    Submitted on 2010-06-08 14:15:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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