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    dots Submission Name: Inquiredots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInquiredots
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    Why asked of such inquiry?
    for you to see, of for one to flee.

    Why asked of such discovery?
    is it to know? or come behold.




    Submitted on 2010-06-08 19:04:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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