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    dots Submission Name: Homey The Snowman dots
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    Author: The Wolverine
    ASL Info:    23/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 74/137/91
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 442
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       This is a parody of "Frosty the snowman" which I have no rights for or anything, that is the original work and inspiration for the character.

    this song answers the question : what if frosty happened in the modern ghetto with a magic do-rag?

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    dotsHomey The Snowman dots
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    Homey the snowman was a old-school, O.G. soul,
    With a white owl blunt and a gorilla's nose
    And two eyes made out of bling.
    Homey the snowman is a fairy tale, they say,
    He was made of snow but the brothers
    Know how he came to life one day.
    There must have been some magic in that
    Old Do-Rag they found.
    For when they put it on his head
    He began to dance around.
    O, Homey the snowman
    Was alive as he could be,
    And the children say he could drink
    And smoke just the same as you and me.
    Thumpetty thump thump,
    Thumpety thump thump,
    Look at Frosty go.
    Thumpetty thump thump,
    Thumpety thump thump,
    Over the hills of snow.

    Frosty the snowman knew
    The sun was hot that day,
    So he said, "Let's run and
    We'll have some fun
    Now before I melt away."
    Down to the village,
    With a broomstick in his hand,
    Running here and there all
    Around the square saying,
    Catch me if you can.
    He led them down the streets of town
    Right to the traffic cop.
    And he only paused a moment when
    He heard him holler "Stop!"
    For Frosty the snow man
    Had to hurry on his way,
    But he waved goodbye saying,
    "Don't you cry,
    I'll be back again some day."
    Thumpetty thump thump,
    Thumpety thump thump,
    Look at Frosty go.
    Thumpetty thump thump,
    Thumpety thump thump,
    Over the hills of snow.




    Submitted on 2010-06-10 03:53:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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