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    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 705
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 252



    Description:
       Thanks Tee.
    I wont be there when you want to come back


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    Throw my ashes into the wind
    Wondering if I can be whole again
    Slain spirit born out of love
    To my twisted stars above
    Thanks for the false hope of forever
    I should have known
    it was a joke starting so young.




    Submitted on 2010-06-10 14:12:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love would be less painful if fate
    made us aware of its expiration date
    | Posted on 2010-06-12 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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