Description: This was written when I was asked to present a writing that would depict what love actually meant to me or for me if i had some one that i did love. This is what i under stand of it, not saying that this is how itís suppose to be.
I think this is so compelling because it's heartfelt. It has a sense of grounded sentiment that can not be rooted in obscure descriptions of sensory overload adjectives. It's simple, direct, deep and relatable. The way the poem rolls off the tongue is beautiful as well. Thank you for sharing.
What l like about this poem are the nice sentiments and the rhyming is consistent. It kinda melts right into after a few reads. it is a very simple poem an does have a very general point of view like you said it showed what you understand of love. Some more specifics would make it more interesting like what specifically you like about her. The way she slides a piece of her hair back when it gets loose and falls into her face. Or what she may say that lifts your spirits somethings like that