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    dots Submission Name: a poem isdots
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    Author: fryte
    ASL Info:    32/male/Pomona
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 321/357/91
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 428
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    dotsa poem isdots
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    a poem is
    a glitch
    a stitch unraveling
    searching
    for that one
    reassuring pulse
    that one beat
    promising
    to balance
    continuity
    in its hands
    its embrace
    under one torn
    wound
    open
    for all to
    consume
    we all bleed
    poetry
    we all expose ourselves
    at some point
    on this page
    and i
    am no exception
    i give myself
    to you




    Submitted on 2010-06-12 05:29:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      man this is BEYOND AMAZING!! thanks for posting

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2010-06-17 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      as always, impessive, bro. im suprised you posted. its been a long while now. anyways, fave! you never lose your touch.
    | Posted on 2010-06-17 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
      A poem is to each there own, room for vast interpretations. "We all bleed poetry", and that's the truth. Vulnerability stands behind great works of art because the writer not only puts words down, but they intact with each poem a piece of themselves. To me this poem reads well and helps me get a feel of the heart you put into it. Consumption of such great works as this leaves me reassured that there really are people who feel the poetry and don't just write it. Thank you for your wonderful lyrical contribution.
    | Posted on 2010-06-15 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      I favorited this one. I really really like it. I love poetry that is about poetry. :)

    It has such a great rhythm and I like the internal rhyme at the beginning.

    My favorite part happens to be something I have heard before in the poetry of others... so although it is a tad unoriginal, it still fits really well into the work.

    "We all bleed poetry" is a concept/image I have read before. However, I love that you then expand and speak about exposure as well as giving yourself over to the reader.

    Thanks for posting this one and I look forward to reading more from you.
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 00:00:00 | by melancholystar | [ Reply to This ]
      Poetry -harmonious connubial of mind and words(spoken and writen)The zeal to express,the urgency to unburden
    A glimmer of hope in a solution. The telling, the easing of tension. Cool stuff keep it coming!
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      Poetry -harmonious connubial of mind and words(spoken and writen)The zeal to express,the urgency to unburden
    A glimmer of hope in a solution. The telling, the easing of tension. Cool stuff keep it coming!
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      Poetry -harmonious connubial of mind and words(spoken and writen)The zeal to express,the urgency to unburden
    A glimmer of hope in a solution. The telling, the easing of tension. Cool stuff keep it coming!
    | Posted on 2010-06-13 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      Noice!!!!!
    | Posted on 2010-06-12 00:00:00 | by rytrsbloc | [ Reply to This ]


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