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    dots Submission Name: The Mosaic of Lovedots
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    Author: thepulse
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 11/2/2
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 545
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    Description:
       The references at the end are couples that were happily married in the bible.


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    dotsThe Mosaic of Lovedots
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    Rich history
    The intense harmonic connections between hearts,
    Swords have fallen
    Empires toppled
    Lands conquered within the hurricane of its beautiful fury
    Lovely, powerful, majestic
    With its cascading light enforced by truth, divine, when ones are caught up in its triumph
    Kingdoms of glory with us as reflections upon mountains as foundations
    Men have lived for it and have been deprived of its seal
    But, survival without it in its purest for is impossible...

    Mist gently dances about
    Rainfall of the night is finished
    Purifying,
    Under the daybreak two commit to becoming one

    Beauty and her lover begin their own mosaic
    A tapestry unwinding from secret persons
    Striving to transcend the harsh winds of events chained to event which can amount to grave situations that can crush
    The struggle to survive is a sacred mission aided by Love's Heartbeat
    A threefold cord that resonates deep

    Within the walls of emotion and thought there is yielded two who are bonded
    By the enjoyment of each other, of life, of the commandments of Jehovah God
    They take their rings from his palm
    Happiness, joy, contentment, within their own rhythm of affection

    Stable and strong meets level headed and sweet
    Humble and kind unites with unselfish and mild tempered
    Rugged and fun combines with pretty and discreet
    Jacob is Rachel
    Isaac takes Rebecca
    Shulamite maiden bonds with the Shepard boy
    I take you by the hand and our own Mosaic of love begins to form





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      Your intertwining of history and events are very interesting how depicted of such a price the very thing love is and in such a matter that is has been presented or how it was taken for granted. And how had become into it like where you mentioned that man canít live without such a possession in any form. And its good how you ended it with biblical caricatures that with Jehovahís help theyíve stayed together with GODís true love.

    Faide
    | Posted on 2010-06-12 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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