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    dots Submission Name: Etherealdots

    Author: Mithrandir
    ASL Info:    28/m/N.Y.
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 452/681/113
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    The silence between us
    is but a testament
    only the naive believe
    love comes from the heart

    No longer will my voice
    be as thunder in your ears
    these are the final thoughts
    I give to you

    Death comes in many forms
    and as often as the setting sun
    there shall be no mourning
    no empty platitudes
    not this time

    Because emotion
    is our inconvenient truth
    Chemical reactions from
    conscious and subconscious thought

    It's criminal
    the void that spans between
    but from the weight of guilt
    neither is spared

    Maybe I have nothing left to offer
    and you may no longer care
    Yet blood still flows
    the organic remains intact

    An angry man has passed beyond the veil

    Now a hopeful man stands
    hand outstretched
    heart unbroken

    but worry not
    many years remain
    till he see's his sunset

    though fists may burn with hatred
    Chests may constrict with fear
    and skulls pound from anger
    these things are born of the body

    Love is ethereal
    it comes from the soul
    and it shall always remain

    I just thought you should know

    Submitted on 2010-06-12 18:39:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      again...such bare, ferocious truths...but that ring of hope as this nears its end...

    as we want to have hope of doing some good before we reach our end..

    that we make some mark..that we make peace with others and more importantly ourselves.

    | Posted on 2011-03-14 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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