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confusion is a dream
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i dont really think i had any clue what i was typing but i like it. :)
confusion is a dream
Living in a new world full of
Bright light that through
all my dark thoughts of
closing my eyes i see that
I am stronger then credit gives.
Walk into an unknown destination
with the decision that it's better the here.
Close your eyes and understand what
Is behind every message that is
shadowed by our misery. Shine the light
of knowledge on the confusion.
in a world where all live
in it's utmost beauty
with no shame and
no care in the world.
What is beyond the darkened
sky of night? truly it becomes
an unknown mystery of brilliance.
Looking deep within the real vision.
the only thing that is beautiful
to just about anyone yet for some
reason it makes no sense on how
it could benefit our lives.
Recognize the brilliance before
your eyes close and ten when all is
calm, truly understand that all the beauty and
confusion in the world is a dream.
Submitted on 2010-06-16 19:08:55
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You are a very talented writer, your words ring the truth.
Love of Christ,
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