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    dots Submission Name: confusion is a dreamdots
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    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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       i dont really think i had any clue what i was typing but i like it. :)


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    dotsconfusion is a dreamdots
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    Living in a new world full of
    Bright light that through
    all my dark thoughts of
    the present.

    closing my eyes i see that
    I am stronger then credit gives.
    Walk into an unknown destination
    with the decision that it's better the here.

    Close your eyes and understand what
    Is behind every message that is
    shadowed by our misery. Shine the light
    of knowledge on the confusion.

    in a world where all live
    in it's utmost beauty
    with no shame and
    no care in the world.

    What is beyond the darkened
    sky of night? truly it becomes
    an unknown mystery of brilliance.
    Looking deep within the real vision.

    the only thing that is beautiful
    to just about anyone yet for some
    reason it makes no sense on how
    it could benefit our lives.

    Recognize the brilliance before
    your eyes close and ten when all is
    calm, truly understand that all the beauty and
    confusion in the world is a dream.




    Submitted on 2010-06-16 19:08:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You are a very talented writer, your words ring the truth.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2010-06-17 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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