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    dots Submission Name: It doesn't killdots
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    Author: cherrywillow
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 29/47/32
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIt doesn't killdots
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    No matter the pain
    It is easy to say that I
    Cannot die just because
    Love wanted to be unfair.

    Hearts can be broken,
    Promises can be broken,
    Trust can be completely
    Destroyed, but does it kill?

    It hurts and tears are shed
    Blood is spilled and depression
    Then brews over the edge of
    Our young hearts, yet we live.

    You can try and understand
    But it is to complicated from
    Just a few words of an unknown
    Message, it doesn't destroy.

    Confusion becomes a famous
    Thing we all decide to blame
    Because we have no clue what
    Love is really suppose to be




    Submitted on 2010-06-16 19:18:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked the last line the most. Overall, i think it is relatable to for anyone and has a positive message for anyone with a broken, aching heart.
    | Posted on 2010-06-17 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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