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    dots Submission Name: About Medots

    Author: Quin
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 39/39/21
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAbout Medots

    I'm someone who will listen, and act when times are right.
    I'll be there for when you fall, and when you need some light.
    I'll try my best to tell you truths, when all you've heard is lies;
    I'll try my best to keep you safe, to hold you through the night.

    But I can't always do these things, and I hope that you'll forgive
    the awful parts about me, which desperately still live
    inside my heart, where dark resides, and most things good have fled.
    And maybe when you see them, you will think 'Bad!' instead.

    Perhaps I'm vague and wandering, when I should be concise,
    and maybe I've revealed too much, and maybe that's alright.
    Because, my friend, the honest truth, is that we are all bad -
    but some will not concede to it, and that's what makes us grand.

    Submitted on 2010-06-18 01:57:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i agree with bloodstone this is amazing i cannot believe only myself and another has commented on this post give it time they'll see the greatness in this write!! truely amazing as if you are questioning yourself your having a heart to heart asking yourself ... omg I LOVE IT

    | Posted on 2010-06-22 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      i just love this poem. it really has heart in it . good write!
    haven't read anything like it b4 .

    my fav Line:
    I'll try my best to tell you truths, when all you've heard is lies;

    | Posted on 2010-06-18 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]

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