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Home in Your Heart


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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positive poetry, is not my strong point I tell you,


Home in Your Heart



My voice could bounce,
& echo off every wall
Be drenched in red
& sink into the depths of the floor
While I spend my days watching a clock
That’s never told the time
& a phone, that never returns my call
But I wouldn’t have a care in the world
Cause it’s never lonely, in your heart at all.

My life could revolve and never rest-
Remain seated and never stand,
Seeing not an inch of sun,
Or light when the darkness falls
Cause there’s no reason to fight,
Strike a match, or catch my breath,
Cause it’s never dark, in your heart at all.




Submitted on 2010-06-19 02:45:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2010-06-23 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
  Hope you pay the rent for your lodging! Funny
Cool work sounds like a contented place to be,
The easy structure does'nt allow for errors which is good.
Your power of expression to me can be tuned more but the effect I get from this is visual,like I can see you locked in a dark place like a prisoner but if this place is a loved one's heart then it wont be dark and it would or you would like it there.
Then the line saying -you have on reason to fight tells me of a strong influence you have on a loved one.nice work
| Posted on 2010-06-23 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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