My voice could bounce,
& echo off every wall
Be drenched in red
& sink into the depths of the floor
While I spend my days watching a clock
That’s never told the time
& a phone, that never returns my call
But I wouldn’t have a care in the world
Cause it’s never lonely, in your heart at all.
My life could revolve and never rest-
Remain seated and never stand,
Seeing not an inch of sun,
Or light when the darkness falls
Cause there’s no reason to fight,
Strike a match, or catch my breath,
Cause it’s never dark, in your heart at all.
| ||| Posted on 2010-06-23 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ] || Hope you pay the rent for your lodging! Funny|
Cool work sounds like a contented place to be,
The easy structure does'nt allow for errors which is good.
Your power of expression to me can be tuned more but the effect I get from this is visual,like I can see you locked in a dark place like a prisoner but if this place is a loved one's heart then it wont be dark and it would or you would like it there.
Then the line saying -you have on reason to fight tells me of a strong influence you have on a loved one.nice work
|| Posted on 2010-06-23 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ] |