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    dots Submission Name: The Harpsichord Harbingerdots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 75/191/246
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Harpsichord Harbingerdots
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    Crazy crack-addled pedestrians, like dancing skeletons on Walt Disney's broken black and white visions.
    Peering eyes roll over like stones, exposing the moisture beneath the callous surface, shifting back as Death begins to dine on your sands of time.

    A harbinger was said to come tonight, night.
    A harpsichord cricks and creeps through the cold soulless streets, no lights.
    As was said by the Devil, Darkness was Hell of a town. - The place Death was said to dwell.




    Submitted on 2010-06-19 15:58:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this conjurs up images of dancing skeletens for me. i can almost hear the click-click-clicking of bones with some bizarro music playing in the background.

    too, i think of crazy crack-heads. (been awhile since i've seen one though). and how death always seems to be one step closer. or moreso,
    soulessness. and the lack of anything inside.

    but that's just me, and my take.

    i'm a little odd like that.

    anyhoo...

    oh, as a thought, i would take off the 'sands of time' and leave it at - as Death begins to dine



    | Posted on 2010-06-22 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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