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    dots Submission Name: its her faultdots
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    Author: Blood†Tears
    ASL Info:    17...who cares.my head
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 22/16/25
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       umm. yeah. not a good time.


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    dotsits her faultdots
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    i'm ready to breath fresh air
    to pass on without a care
    so my soul can finally feel free

    here is my oath in blood
    everything i felt for you was in love
    real is an understatement for what we had

    falling for miles at a time
    always trying to pull myself back
    up from the depths to prove myself to you
    love was more like a ball and chain
    to this day i dont care. i'll always love you.




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