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    dots Submission Name: Color Me Conceited dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsColor Me Conceited dots
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    Dreams of changing faces, eyes brown or blue?
    The shades under the sun shift in hues,
    the fragmented light holds a prismatic effect,
    a rainbow it reflects...
    Waking up that ego you abuse,
    it rolls over and wants a moment more,
    it rests despite the absence of eyes,
    it rests waiting for a color to inspire.




    Submitted on 2010-06-21 19:01:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      If an ego falls in the forest, does it make a sound?

    Good question.

    soul-hugger
    | Posted on 2010-06-22 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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