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    dots Submission Name: Cathedral of Bluebellsdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 407
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsCathedral of Bluebellsdots
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    Seems so long ago
    When all the delight in your dreams
    Made the heart in your eyes shine glow
    And how long ago
    When they told you
    It wasnít so

    Still, your wonder is gasping
    Dancing in sweet fairy rings
    Unicorns riding the clouds on eagle wings
    Still the tender heroes and heroines
    The defenders of everything innocent

    Lay aside your books
    Depart from your imaginings
    The poetry which made your souls sing
    Forget the worlds of the mysterious and beauty
    Live with the cold
    Until you grow old
    In the mechanics of simply surviving

    Still, you wander the crystalline seas
    The barques made of glass catch the winds
    While dragons encircle the moon and the stars
    The gentle magic in the spells you cast
    Still, the ancient hallows bare your name
    And in secret forest temples
    Your revelry and worship remains

    Let them fade, slip from your palms
    The tears of your sorrow bid them all farewell
    Just make believe
    Donít you remember they told you
    It wasnít so
    And now you can live
    In a world that holds no awe at all
    Live in the cold
    Until you grow old

    ButÖ.. still

    Still, your heart will race with your dreams
    Your longing can outweigh everything
    And the soul in your eyes shine glow
    With the amazement of a world you know
    Where fairies hold feasts on the eve
    And Elfin music turns all to heady belief
    Where the breath of frost dragons have blown
    Reviving the Princess of summer and spring
    The cathedral of bluebells her home
    And a dewdrop carries her new born
    Still, in your minds eye paints the yearning
    And how you long to return to your dreams
    Where in the face of your own crystal ball
    You knew it all

    But thatís just the child
    And its time to put away all these childish things
    Listen instead
    And we will tell you how everything really is
    Just explainable rainbows
    Pick up our books
    Our numbers and graphs
    And depart from your foolish imaginings

    Forget the worlds of all this mysteriousness and beauty
    Live with the cold
    Until you grow old
    In the mechanics of simply surviving
    Seems so long ago
    When all the delight in your dreams
    Made the heart in your eyes shine glow
    And how long ago
    When they told you
    None of it was true




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