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    dots Submission Name: Welcome Homedots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 376
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    dotsWelcome Homedots
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    Welcome home.
    Baby girl you've had it rough.
    And I know sometimes life seems tough.
    But the effort is always worth it,
    Even when your low and feeling like shit.
    The times you share your mind,
    Are almost impossible to find.
    But the love you give me,
    Is all I'll ever need.
    So grace me with your hand.
    Together lets make a stand.
    With a vow or two set the pace.
    And a ring to settle the case.
    Let us be together always.
    Never let this be just another phase.
    With all my heart and more,
    I love you deep to my core.
    Welcome Home!




    Submitted on 2010-06-23 03:36:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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