Tonight

Author: MC white ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71 /73 /45 Words: 69

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Tonight

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I stood out in the summer, watched a storm blow in. The clouds poured rushing forward, The few seen stars grew dim. The trees were filled with fireflies, I watched one spiral down like a star flung from the heavens, or a snowflake, snowbank bound. And as his kin all sparkled, like I was Celebrity. I took a step into the wind, and wished you were with me.

Submitted on 2010-06-23 23:18:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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MC! what good my dude? ok this what it is..... this is a lil soft ur u dude. sorry. um.... my one suggestion tho is say "grow dim" gives a lil polysyllabic flare...idk.. nice to have u back dude i stop in here periodically... im starting to realize meyself ive gotta get back to my idk.... RANGE...so to speak, cuz i been doin alotta luv/miss u/ heartbroken stuff. its a issue we all attack so many times..... thats cuz its timeless... this would make a nice lil note for some one to "find" lol

| Posted on 2010-06-29 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]

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