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    dots Submission Name: I Love You Stilldots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       This was written for a man that I still love to this day.


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    dotsI Love You Stilldots
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    Infatuated by our unrelenting memories,
    Controlled by your lingering existence.
    Estranged by an immeasurable distance.
    Eyes are crimson from reoccurring reflections.
    Petrified, I am from moments of total helplessness.
    My soul ruptures in all this wretchedness.
    Unconditionally unhinged by thoughts of you.
    Dreams so convincing, reality is motionless.
    Awaken to shadows that existence is meaningless.
    Completely entranced in a obsession of you
    Knowing it is you I wish for is nothing new.
    Question do you realize my sickness.
    My heart and soul have a weakness for you




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