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    dots Submission Name: Samsaradots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 364
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    dotsSamsaradots
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    This is it, don't breathe a sigh
    And don't forget, it's just a ride
    And if it lets you go too soon
    We'll meet on the other side
    Is it familiar or different
    No one can say
    You may be astonished
    And if you're afraid, that's okay
    We are here now, breathe
    We are here now, be
    Let me stay here with you forever
    Let me lay here with you forever
    Until sweet death serves our sever
    I will be part of you forever

    Everyone's on their own time
    No matter where they stand
    And if your time ends before mine
    I swear I'll understand
    Because they make us to break
    And there's nothing we can take with us
    Your name fades away alongside the pain
    Even the pain accumulated through the lengthiest of lives
    To breathe in is to feel elated
    To breathe in is to stay inside
    Though we may break from the pressure
    If It builds and don't subside
    If we can stand, we will
    And if we can't, we'll try

    Leave all your dreams behind
    And bathe in the radiant light
    Should I leave you with my death to bear
    I'll wait to meet and guide you where
    We abandon desire, and dismal care
    And we'll go blind together in the baptismal glare
    Where there are no more sins left to atone
    Where we don't have to die alone




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