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    dots Submission Name: Black widow v3 (chasing butterfiles v1)dots
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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 455
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1011



    Description:
       Ok. The original and v2 didnt hack it and now i am thinking of changing the name to Chasing butterflies.

    Suggestions? Improvements? Writing tips?


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    dotsBlack widow v3 (chasing butterfiles v1)dots
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    Youíre all caught in my web of lies
    The sun filters down on
    You
    Look like butterflies.

    Fluttering wings rip,
    Like lace
    The dying beat of your heart
    As you fade without a trace.
    My web weaved stronger
    As you fell,
    Your fragile body caught
    And with me you shall dwell.

    Fade away and sing me your dreams
    Iíll offer you a helping hand,
    Though shadowed, it gleams
    Hold on tight or you might slip through
    But the web wonít let go until Iím done with you
    Fall

    Down
    On to your knees
    Donít be afraid I wonít let you bleed.
    I will take from you the
    Heart of all your pain
    A slow dance with me and you will never be the same

    I hear the frightened cries
    And I see the broken smile
    Oh how time fliesÖ
    Wont you stay a while
    You
    Look like butterflies
    I donít want to let go




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