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    dots Submission Name: Weathereddots
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    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    27 Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 261/310/148
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 590
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 387



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       random..I was rudely awakened this morning by a chirping smoke alarm with a low battery. the early bird sprouts poetry from the ears on occasion. hope you enjoy :)


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    dotsWeathereddots
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    Crack of light streaking angrily through,
    it will implode all disgrace in the storm.
    Hold tight to the rocks, cling for dear life,
    weather it as it weathers the soul.

    Red dawn in morning, delighted to see
    the night through as intact as could be.
    Avere fede, another will come and wash
    all the destruction this tempest has left us.




    Submitted on 2010-06-25 07:15:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       the poem is short - that's OK!! it was a good " in the moment" piece .
    the images of tale stand out, stand on there own. other then that ....
    keep on writing ...

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    Red dawn in morning, delighted to see
    the night through as intact as could be.

    peace, love, kindness

    bloodstone
    | Posted on 2010-06-25 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]


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